Response to feedback

In response to our feedback on our rough cut.
We have read our feedback and on the whole we are happy with the response we got. In response to our feedback we can extend the length of our opening and work on our soundtrack to make it fit better with our video sequence.
We agree with the feedback that our sequence is to short and needs to be lengthened and to do this we are planning to film some more scenes which will make up opening go up to the required timings. Also we agree with the fact that sometimes our soundtrack does not always match the sequence on the screen which then makes the clip loose some atmosphere. To overcome this we will work hard on our soundtrack to make it better and more conventional of the thriller genre.