Friday 12 March 2010

Rough Cut Feedback

Group P1 05
- We thought that the camera angles used were really effective and added to the atmosphere as they had some interesting shots, such as the shots through the metal fence.
We thought that the scene made sense as it showed the body first and then the photographs meaning that they may be linked. It made sense although it did not give too much away, which we thought was really clever.
We thought that it could be improved as the last scene where Marina was on the floor, the music cuts which ruins the atmosphere slightly. Apart from this, the music throughout the sequence is really effective and made it very tense. Wicked! (Y)

Group P1 01
-We though the editing used looked very professional and the sound used was well synchronized with what was going on in the opening. There was a very wide range of camera shots which built up tension and looked as though it will lead to a good plot throughout the rest of the thriller. This will engage viewers and make them want to see the rest. They need to make it a lot longer to fit in the time frame that it is supposed to be (2 minutes 30). Despite only having a short amount of footage it is still top notch.

P1-02- We believe that the production was very good. We liked the array of different shot types, especially when looking though the stairs. We like the variation from colour to black & white, which contrasted emotion from the characters. Overall, we believe the music we quite good, although some parts did not fir the sequence.

P1-03-
Good soundtrack
Liked the refocusing of the camera when photos were introduced
Quite short length
Interesting shots
Nice use of zooms
Liked the contrast of locations
Good use of costume, girl in red

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